This is my Toon Deck please rate and help with it?

Question

Hey everyone i wanted you to see how this toon deck is here it goes
monsters
1 toon dark magician girl
1 toon summoned skull
1 toon masked sorcerer
1 toon table of contents
1 blue eyes toon dragon
1 manga ryu ran
3 toon world
1 toon goblin attack force
1 toon gemini elf
1 toon alligator
1 toon canon soldier
1 toon mermaid
1 skilled dark magician
2 regenerating mummy
1 blast magician
1 time wizard
1 castle of dark illusions
1 dark magician
1 pumpking king of ghosts
1 zombyra the dark
1 pyramid turtle
1 rapid fire magician
1 dark blade
1 relinquished

spells
1 poison of the old man
1 mage power
1 emergency provisions
1 mystical space typhoon
1 black illusion ritual
1 call of the haunted
3 toon world
1 spell economics
1 nightmare steel cage
1 megamorph
1 swords of revealing light
1 lighting vortex
1 toon table of contents
1 salamandra
1 malevolent nuzzler
1 spell absorption

traps
1 ceasefire
1 compulsory evacuation device
1 trap hole
1 magic jammer
1 robbin' zombie
1 a hero emerges
1 toon defense
1 enchanted javelin

well thats all critisism is welcome

Answer 1

Not a bad start, I have been using a toon deck for some time, so here are a few tips.



-1 manga ryu ran (he isnt worth the 2 tributes)

+1 blue eyes toon dragon (to replace ryu ran)



-1 toon alligator (not actually a toon)

-1 toon mermaid (worst of all the toons, not very helpful at all)

+1 toon gemini elf (strongest LV 4 toon and good effect)



-1 pumpking and castle of illusions, because even after the 4 turns, pumpking will still be weaker than a summoned skull and they are both 1 tribute



+1 toon summoned skull



Also Consider:



Another Toon Table of Contents, most toon decks use 2 or 3 of these because they can search out any toon card and are very valuable.



Personally I would take out Salamandra and add another Mage Power, Mage Power can really make a difference, and usually you will have at least 1 or 2 other cards in your spell/trap zone so thats a good 1000 to 2000 ATK and DEF boost, easily turning a Toon Gemini into a powerhouse.





Add Scapegoat spell card because you can actually tribute them to summon Toon Summoned Skull, Toon Blue Eyes, and Toon Dark Magician Girl because they are special summons not tribute summons.



Replace Enchanted Javelin with Draining Shield (Draining shield also negates the attack, Javelin doesnt)



You could consider adding an Astral Barrier Trap Card and Spirit Barrier trap card, which is a nasty stall and can really end the duel fast if you have a toon on the field already.



I also include 1 Solemn Wishes trap card to get me even more life points.



And call of the haunted is no longer banned, but monster reborn is just to let you know.



Of course these are just suggestions, I am not a pro or anything, I just play for fun so no one bite my head off, I am just giving some ideas lol

Answer 2

i think too much cards and you mentioned toon world twice. call of the haunted is banned i think, but thats it, nice deck

Answer 3

POKEMON RULES!!!!!!!!!!